Last Wednesday you flew from London to Vancouver. When you arrived home, you dsicovered that you had left your hand luggage on the plane. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter, you should explain: Where and when you lost your bag What your bag looks like What its contents were

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to request you my forgotten
bag
on the
flight
from London to Vancouver. I realised when there is one
bag
missing whilst I reached home.
Firstly
, I would like to give you the information about the
flight
which I flew
last
week.
Flight
Number A2345 Boeing from London to Vancouver on 23-03-2022. I lost my
bag
in the cabin where we usually keep our hand luggage. It is on the top of my seat and the number is 25C. Because of the heavy rush in the plane in hurry
burry
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I left the
flight
when it landed immediately.
Although
it is hand luggage, it looks heavy. The Brown
bag
comes in a rectangular shape with two-sided zippers. Not only are the two-sided zippers
also
have small pockets for keeping the water bottles in the front. Since it is a heavy
bag
the zip has locks on both sides.
Moreover
, the
bag
contains some clothes and one small bedsheet. There are some imported toys and I particularly bought them for my kid's sake.
Hence
, I request you to inform me of the possible ways to get my
bag
back. Hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Teju.
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