Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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Traditional teaching methods
Face-to-face interaction
E-learning platforms
Virtual classrooms
Technological advancement
Flexibility in learning
Self-paced study
Immediate feedback
Cost-effectiveness
Geographical barriers
Digital divide
Social environment
Networking opportunities
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