Giving lectures in auditoriums to large numbers of students is an old way of teaching. With the technology available today there is no justification for it, and everything should be done online. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give your own opinion.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Traditional teaching methods
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • E-learning platforms
  • Virtual classrooms
  • Technological advancement
  • Flexibility in learning
  • Self-paced study
  • Immediate feedback
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Geographical barriers
  • Digital divide
  • Social environment
  • Networking opportunities
  • Hands-on experience
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