Some people say that the only reason for learning foreign languages is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country.Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn foreign language. Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

To begin
with, it is advantageous to master a
language
before living abroad. The culture will be simpler and quicker assimilated by an adult who already knows the basics of the
language
.
For example
, Japanese society is very different to
an
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European one. By learning the
language
, individuals can understand some history and idioms of the nation.
Nevertheless
, some people claim that there are other reasons to learn another
language
. Nowadays, there are a variety of foreign TV shows and movies on streaming platforms. Plenty of them,
such
as Korean and Japanese, are very popular with the younger generation. Learning idioms from these languages can be a genuine reason to appreciate foreign films.
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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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