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Overall, it is clearly observed that, of the bar chart shown,whereas the amount of export of petroleum,engineered,
agriculture
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 products and textile increased marginally from 2015 to 2016, only the figure
of
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 gems and jewellery dropped slightly in
this
 given time period.
Additionally
, all the goods’ value increased by different extents between 2015 and 2016, except the gems and jewellery with a decrease. Overall, it is conspicuous that the structure of the pie charts of sodium and saturated fat digested is fairly similar in America, with
highest
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 proportion in dinner and
lowest
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the lowest
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 one in breakfast.
Moreover
, the largest percentage of added sugar consumed by
American
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Americans
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 is in snacks,though the lowest one is
same
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, in breakfast. Overall, what stands out from the diagram is that hydroelectricity must be generated by which the water from
high
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 geographic level provides kinetic energy to turn on
generator
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.Afterwards,the power station
transmit
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 electricity through
power
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 line to
national
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the national
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 grid. Overall, what stands out from the map is that whereas the entrances from Arnold Avenue and Eldon Street have remained the same, the structure of
the
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Grange Park has undergone a significant change from 1920 to the present.Specifically, there have been more recreational facilities for children, adults and the elderly.
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