More and more businesses as well as individuals are choosing to communicate either professionally or socially using technology rather than being face to face. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of using technology for communicating.

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There is no denying fact that the phenomena of communication
is
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trending more and more towards social media
instead
of
meating
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meeting

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in personal. A large number of individuals are in the favour of
this
notion due to the higher counts of merits.
However
, some individuals
believes
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it has demerits over merits. In
this
essay
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both the advantages and the
disvantages
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disadvantages

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will be discussed in detail.
First
and
the
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foremost discussing the best possible benefits, one of the significant advantages is virtual meetings can be held from anywhere across the globe at a
mutual
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mutually

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convenient time.
This
helps in saving enough
of
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funds and
prescious
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precious

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time.
For
example
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a discussion meeting between two entrepreneurs can be conducted over
online
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an online

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video
platform
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platforms

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like Skype, Google
meet
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meets

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or Fase time from their comfort zone without
traveling
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travelling

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anywhere.
Secondly
, knowledge sharing
by
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through

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the mode of distance education is now easily possible at
finger tip
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fingertip

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.
This
in a way
support
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supports

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online teaching with soft copy material
help
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helping

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in
reduction
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the reduction

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of paper utility as a consequence aid to save forest resources.
Additionally
, children can attain skill tutorials from their safe zone.
On the other hand
, there are several drawbacks which make some individuals
to
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apply

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refrain from former
idea
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ideas

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are web met is not always fruitful. There are instances where one cannot deliver
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hundred
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hundred

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hundreed
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a hundreed
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percent
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per cent

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of their understanding due to
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the limitation
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the limitation

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limitation
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limitations
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of being online. As a
consequence
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,consequence

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it can ruin a healthy trade proposal.
Moreover
, it is difficult to build interpersonal
relation
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relations

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between employees, which can lead to trust issues and can disturb
teamspirit
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team spirit

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.
For
example
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when people
does
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do

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not meet face to face,
mind
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the mind

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is in dilemma to believe in the opposite person or not.
Hence
, it can lead to poor bonding causing
impact
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over
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on

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to outcome of the product. Regardless
to
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of

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all demerit it has, it can be
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overcome
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overcome

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over come
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overcome
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. To conclude, despite having
number
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a number
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of demerits peaking tele and web conversation shall continue and shall advance in near future.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Efficiency
  • Convenience
  • Instant messaging
  • Video calls
  • Cost-effectiveness
  • Economical
  • Accessibility
  • Physical barriers
  • Nuanced understanding
  • Impersonal
  • Misunderstandings
  • Reliance
  • Technical failures
  • Vulnerable
  • Security breaches
  • Hacking
  • Data theft
  • Sensitive information
  • Digital communication
  • Face-to-face interactions
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