You are a student at an English language school in Brighton and are living in private accommodation with other flat mates. You have not had hot water or heating for some time. The landlord’s workmen have tried to fix the problem but without success. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter, state your reason for writing describe the problems and explain how you feel propose a solution and risk the landlord to take action

Dear sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you about my
problem
with the heating
system
of my accommodation. I accommodated in Unit 30 and most of the time we don't have hot water
also
sometimes
this
system
has bad noise same booms. I and your staff tried to fix it but unfortunately, the
problem
is very extended and needs to expert. I have some practical suggestions for solving
this
problem
one of them is you can replace
this
heating
system
with another that has more quality as well as more capacity because sometimes hot water was not enough for all of the accommodations. Another possible solution is you can provide another temporary accommodation for us until the heating
system
is completely repaired because we consider informing our situation our school ,especially since the winter is near and our health is at risk. I am eagerly for
waiting
Add the preposition
forwaiting
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your practical action to solve
this
problem
. Yours faithfully, Salehi
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