Some people think that environmental problems are too big for individuals to solve. Others, however, believe that these problems cannot be solved if individuals do not take action. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Concerns related to the environment are rapidly growing these days. Some are of the opinion that individuals can not provide effective solutions while others argue that to tackle those problems, individual action is essential. I will discuss both views in the following paragraphs and, strongly believe that
this
situation can only be handled by governments' efforts since problems with the environment are far beyond individuals' scope.  Troubles with our planet are severe and far beyond personal consideration. For one thing, factories are not cautious about releasing chemical gases into the air and
this
would lead to huge pollution and
also
contributes the global warming. For another, these factories are
also
careless when it comes to getting rid of their waste. The majority of these plants pour their trash into the river,
thus
, promoting water pollution. To tackle
this
, governments are not only obligated to introduce strict laws but
also
should make sure that those companies obey these rules.
On the other hand
, some minor but sounding alterations in humans' daily life may
also
be beneficial in terms of reducing pollution.
To begin
with,
although
electric cars are widely available now, the majority of the citizens still use old fashioned, fuel-burning cars. Since oil has a variety of harmful effects on our ecosystem, people should be tempted to switch their preferences to electric ones.
In addition
to
this
, plastic bags support environmental degradation and
this
can be prevented by using recycled bags.
For example
, a local market in my neighbourhood stopped selling plastic bags and handed out recycled ones for free
instead
. In conclusion, while I believe that long-term solutions can only be provided by governments, the impact of individual actions can never be disregarded, too.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • environmental issues
  • sustainable habits
  • systemic industrial emissions
  • deforestation
  • sustainable operations
  • eco-friendly products
  • consumer demand
  • public advocacy
  • grassroots movements
  • legislative changes
  • conserve energy
  • reduce waste
  • recycling
  • supply chains
  • international cooperation
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