Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantage and disadvantage of such a choice?

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People

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have different options regarding food. While many nations

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that they prefer to go out for ready-made food.Whereas others support prefer

foods

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themselves.

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essay will examine cases of

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action and the forthcoming paragraphs show both the agreement and the disagreement sides. On the one hand, the basic disadvantage of eating ready food is that

people

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do not have enough time to prefer themselves.

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, the community tend to earn lots of money that's why they work overtime,especially for

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generations.

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, they had to out to dinner or lunches a result they destroyed their eating balanced and healthy diet.

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, the most common reason is poor dietary habits and eating unhealthy

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like junk

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. these kinds of

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to lead

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obesity.children become overweight and obese for a variety of reasons.

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, in England, most

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are suffering from obesity. Turning off the other hands of argument,

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, we can see the price of the vegetables and ingredients increase day-by-day,that's why

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more tend to get ready meals because those types of

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cheaper than from they prepared.Because nowadays big companies produce mass products like pizza, hotdog,chees and so on.

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, nowadays humans do not know how to prepare dishes that's why they have to go out. In conclusion, I support both sides of

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statement but I think if you

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prepared

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some sorts of

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you can get lots of emotions and in turn it very useful skill.

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Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantage and disadvantage of such a choice?

Your opinion

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In the near future nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

should long term jobseekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they can give something back to the community ?