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As you know , in
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for Covid 19, all of the
Universites
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and
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heared
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some News about
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Universities
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and Schools can open and they work like that the Ex or past ,but they have to follow some important rules like wear the Students their Mask
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time in Class and Yard, keep their social distance , don’t shake the
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with each other , and something like that. For
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the Students who are don’t
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near to their University ,they should
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in
Dorms
with their Classmates and they should
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put up
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each other
for
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life .So as you know in
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personality
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,it means
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them
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have Bad habits and
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them have Good habits ,but we try to
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get along
get a long
with their Habits .If you couldn’t
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get along
get a long
with them ,you hurt yourself, I never
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in
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,so I have Problem and my Mother doesn’t allow
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me .But one of my Frend ,her name is Sara ,she
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University but in Mashad and her Parents live in Isfahan ,so she should stay in
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for 4 years ,she is so touchy ,and she is so kind , but
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she had an Exam and she was so worried a sick about her Exam and when she went to her Bed she
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and
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all the time and when she
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,she saw a very bad Nightmare and she shouted ,and another Student
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to help her ,they beat her in
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bad way and she went to Hospital ,after that she never came back in tn that University and she dropout her Education for very bad Memory .
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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