You are Dimitar Borisov/Elena Borisova. You do not feel your school is doing enough to give the students access to and knowledge of computers. Write a formal letter to your head teacher, Mr Page, suggesting ways to improve access to IT resources in your school. In your letter: • suggest the formation of a lunchtime and/or after-school computer club; • propose ways to improve the facilities available (e.g. replacing old and outdated equipment, etc.); • outline the potential benefits of these changes. Start and finish the letter in an appropriate way.

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Page, I am writing to you for suggestions

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because I think our school is not doing enough to give students access to and knowledge of computers. One way to solve

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problem can be by creating lunchtime and after school computer clubs. The

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problem is by replacing the old and outdated equipment with new and faster ones. By doing

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steps I think that the students will be motivated to make new programs that will help the

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ones, they will learn faster and do faster their tasks. If you liked my suggestions please let me know by contacting me

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letter. I will be glad. Yours sincerely, Dimitar Borisov