You are Dimitar Borisov/Elena Borisova. You do not feel your school is doing enough to give the students access to and knowledge of computers. Write a formal letter to your head teacher, Mr Page, suggesting ways to improve access to IT resources in your school. In your letter: • suggest the formation of a lunchtime and/or after-school computer club; • propose ways to improve the facilities available (e.g. replacing old and outdated equipment, etc.); • outline the potential benefits of these changes. Start and finish the letter in an appropriate way.

Mr Page, I am writing you with the concern that the

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lacks the ability to give the

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access to and knowledge of computers. I believe that my suggestions will be very beneficial not only for the

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but for you as well

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since that would increase the

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reputation.

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, creating a computer club and promoting it would bring a huge interest in the

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. I suggest the meeting

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be after

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hours. That way

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won't be distracted from the other subjects. The comfort we should bring to the room that we would use should be

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great interest to the

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. The furniture available must be replaced with

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one but not

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luxurious. The equipment the

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posses is too outdated and must be replaced as well. Of course,

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upgrading would cost a lot so in my mind a picture

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selling sweets. Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I hope to hear soon from you. Yours faithfully, Elena Borisova