Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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choice of
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there are people who
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freedom, they believe that
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I will discuss both sides and elaborate
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own view. Nowadays, learning
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science and technology-related
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getting more popular, due to current
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, plenty of researchers showed that
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by their own
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, afterwards were more efficient and motivated rather than
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who had been forced to learn. Even though, science and
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subjects
have a more probability to lead a student to success and good post, in reason of demand for specialists in
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sphere. Despite all, In my opinion, people should study whatever they want, they should try themselves in different areas. In conclusion, choosing courses
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can encourage
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imposing
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can benefit their performance. I strongly believe that
students
should feel free to study whatever they prefer.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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