Lectures were used in the past with many students. With modern technology available for education, there is no justification for this way of teaching. Do you agree or disagree?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
However
Linking Words
,high-tech do has
negative
Add an article
a negative
show examples
impact on teaching students,both
in
Change preposition
apply
show examples
physically and mentally.
Linking Words
This
Correct determiner usage
These
show examples
new
generations
Fix the agreement mistake
generation
show examples
students
Change preposition
of students
show examples
were born with high -tech,they are familiar with technology
equipments
Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
show examples
,which can
benefited
Change the verb form
benefit
show examples
their
study
Fix the agreement mistake
studies
show examples
a lot.For instants,they can learn
for
Change preposition
from
show examples
online
Add an article
an online
the online
show examples
lecture
Fix the agreement mistake
lectures
show examples
in spite of the space and time restrictions .
Linking Words
Correct your spelling
Furthermore
show examples
Further more
Correct your spelling
Furthermore
show examples
,as the big data showed more students are prone to choose electronic
equipments
Change the wording
equipment
types of equipment
pieces of equipment
show examples
during their study time.From my personal perspective,
i
Change the capitalization
I
show examples
think modern technology is available for education.
Submitted by 59213142 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: