Your friend invited you to his/her party, but you are unable to attend.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain why you cannot come• give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner •suggest another time to meet

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Dear Sara, I wanted to let you know that I am not attending your birthday party

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some reason and I apologize for

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. I want to attend your birthday event, but my situation will not allow me to attend it. Yesterday, I

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suddenly received a call from my grandfather, and he told me that granny slipped from the staircase. What's more, she got hospitalized as her arm was severely injured,So, I had to go there in the evening.

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my grandfather is there with my grandmother, he cannot handle all these things alone. My grandparents are residing in the countryside area, so the signal network of

this

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area is very low. That's why I am unable to contact you in

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regard early.

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, I wish you a happy birthday through

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letter because I have no other option than to contact you. I'm sorry once again, and could you please tell me when you are available

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week

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I would like to go to the dinner party as I am on

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holiday from next week when I come back to Delhi. I hope you will understand my situation. I'm looking forward to seeing you. Best regards, Rupi

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coherence cohesion

Ensure that the greeting and closing are appropriate for the letter format and the level of formality required for the task.

coherence cohesion

Maintain a logical structure throughout the letter, and consider organizing the content into distinct paragraphs to enhance coherence and cohesion.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary to express ideas more precisely and to enhance the overall quality of the letter.

grammatical range

Pay attention to the accurate use of verb tenses, punctuation, and sentence structures to ensure clarity and grammatical accuracy.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

203 words

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Your friend invited you to his/her party, but you are unable to attend.Write a letter to your friend. In your letter •explain why you cannot come• give your reason for not contacting your friend sooner •suggest another time to meet

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities. Others believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport.

Robots and artificial intelligence are being developed to replace human in workplace. Why is this happening? Do you think this will have positive or negative impact on society?

Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think that it’s a waste of time. Discuss both sides of question!

As life expectancy is increasing, people work after retirement with pay. Alternatively, some people start to work at a young age. Are these positive or negative impacts?