Employees sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Owners sometimes ask individuals applying for service for personal
data
, like their hobbies and interests and whether they are a couple or single. I believe that
this
information is relevant and useful so we will discuss both these views in
this
essay. On one hand, in
this
technology era,
data
is most useful for everyone and personal
data
's wrong used by some
employers
so
this
is not shared with anyone reason of personal security of information.
For example
, in India in 2015, a big company's server was hacked and hackers stole many
people
's personal
data
and they use
this
information in criminal history.
As a result
, apart from
this
technology individuals were not given their important and personal
data
to inappropriate
employers
.
On the other hand
, if
people
want a
job
in any company or organisation the employer asks for their personal
data
reason of their strong profile, work habits and experience.
In addition
, they
also
ask
people
about their family relations because they organise that particular person's work hours or
job
shift and sometimes
employers
use
people
's hobbies in their workplace and its benefits for employees.
For instance
, in 2014, I passed an interview and they give me work as a horse rider of because my interest in horse riding.
Consequently
, if individuals share their personal
data
with
employers
then
they have lots of benefits in their career and progress with a high salary and
also
they got a
job
in a calm environment. To conclude, I fully agree that
people
sharing their personal
data
is more helpful in their
job
. But we do not underestimate our secure
data
sent to unknown
employers
or organisations.
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