some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. others believe that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. discuss both the views and give your oiupnion.

Many people believe that the crucial component for society's

health

is improving

sports

amenities, while others laon to the idea that

this

is not profitable,

however

, there are a lot of approaches, which could show the real results.

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essay discusses both nations and

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I will give my own perspective. On the one hand, the main argument, that

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the former idea is that by creating more

sports

facilities (gyms, football fields, basketball floors) people can serve them for their

health

.

Firstly

, if there is an area in which children can play

sports

games they are more likely to become healthier. As well as

this

,

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or town which can provide

such

kind of areas would be more attractive for migrating.

Secondly

, when kids have

sports

conditions in the future they might become professional athletes, which, without any doubt,

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great benefit for the country.

Last

but not least, families, who have physical activities every day, demonstrate better

health

marks.

On the other hand

, it is

also

the fact that only by building

sports

facilities we can not solve all

health

problems. Currently, humanity is too lazy,

thus

they do not want to visit any

sports

events.

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, the century's huge problem is obesity. Despite there being a big number of gyms they

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hence

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laziness.

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kind of

problems

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it

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is necessary to use other methods.

For instance

, it seems appropriate to use social media for propaganda active lifestyle.

Also

, if children are taught to do some physical activities at school it goes without saying that

this

habit will not disappear from their life. In conclusion, it is clear that there is

the

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problem with public

health

. I strongly believe it is impossible to resolve

this

problem by only introducing

sports

areas. It is necessary to use

variety

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of methods

such

as school programs,

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media propaganda and make it more fun.