what are the dos and don'ts of being a roommate? what should we do to be a good roommate?

All the
people
like to be independent and not
living
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off their parents .
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the most common desire
which
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that
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young
people
have . lots of young
people
over 18 have to live in
dormitory
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when they start the university in another city or
studying
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abroad .
one
of the
first
and simple ways of being independent is exactly moving to a
dormitory
or renting a house ,
it’s
the
first
step of standing on our own feet .
Although
it seems interesting and cool to be on your own feet in
this
way , there are lots of challenges you will face for sure .you should think straight
of
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the difficulties of your decision .renting a house or living in a
dormitory
is not that much easy that it seems .
First
of
all
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you must be aware of the feeling of loneliness . when you leave your house for the
first
time you feel like you are the happiest and
freest
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one
in the world ,but
by
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the
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time passes you find yourself alone.
its
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only you ,not your mother not your father or anyone else .
Anyway
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you might have a
roommate
.
this
is another challenge “getting along with a new person “ . If your
roommate
is your friend or the
one
you already know
its
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ok . you should just consider the rules you need in
dormitory
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the dormitory
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. since you know that person , getting along with him is easy you can share the tasks like cooking ,cleaning, paying the bills or… .
Then
just imagine your
roommate
is the
one
you don’t know
him
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and
it’s
the
first
time you meet him .
It’s
the beginning of the story . you should try to discover his personality . the difference
of
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the culture ,the
different
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differences
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of
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habits ,
taste
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tastes
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,plans and everything . In my view , having a
roommate
has both
advantage
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advantages
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and
disadvantage
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disadvantages
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if you want to know which part is the most part just take a look at your own characteristic , easygoing
people
have convenient and funny life than others . Overall tolerating these hardships worth it .you would experience new
thing
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,learn lots of
thing
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,face difficulties and find the solution .
finally
you find yourself a new person who is experienced and stronger than before .
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