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punishing the driver who driving offences seriously can improve the increasing number of traffic accidents. While there are many other
way
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ways
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to perfect
the
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apply
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road safety, my view
is apply
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is applied
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more severe punishment is the most
efficiency
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efficient
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way
. There is some controversy that
weather
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whether
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punishing the driver who driving offences seriously can improve the increasing number of traffic accidents. While there are many other
way
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ways
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to perfect
the
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apply
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road safety, my view
is apply
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is applied
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more severe punishment is the most
efficiency
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efficient
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way
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