The population for India and China has high growth drastically. Do you agree or disagree?

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The graph illustrates the numbers of
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and
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China
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population
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growth for the past 50 years in terms of billions. Overall, the country of
China
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has a high figure of
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population
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the population
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from the start
compares
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to
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.
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, in the end,
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obtains the highest
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that
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over
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China
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the beginning of the year 2000,
India
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has only 1
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total
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in total
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of
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population
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according to UN
Population
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Division: Medium variant,
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,
China
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takes over approximately 250
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more than
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India
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. Both countries gradually increased and crossed over in the year 2030 at about 1.420
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total
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residents. In the end,
China
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gradually plummetted
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about 1.4
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population
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in the year 2050 but
India
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skyrocketted
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skyrocketed
the number of
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at
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1.6
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which is higher
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about 200
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in
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China
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