You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you decided to move to a different city • Describe the new city and accommodation • Ask your friend to arrange a visit

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Dear Sara, I hope you are doing well. I'm writing

this

letter to give you some good news. I'm excited to share that I

finally

moved to Mumbai city a few days back. As you know that I applied for a job

last

month, and now, I've been selected for

this

opportunity. So I have to shift to

this

city for my work commitments. What's more, working in Mumbai is my dream project which has become true. On top of that work exposure in

this

city is quite competitive, and I think it would be great for new experiences. Plus, a company has given me a shared apartment equipped with several modern amenities. It is located on the 5th floor, in the Goregaon area. I was wondering if you will come to my new house and enjoy some time with us to celebrate these moments. I am looking forward to seeing you soon at my home. Best wishes, Rupi

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8 paragraphs

159 words

8.50

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Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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You have recently moved to a different city. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Explain why you decided to move to a different city • Describe the new city and accommodation • Ask your friend to arrange a visit

The advantageof owning a smartphone to search within a specific website outweigh the disadvantage of affecting on people's health unless people can reduce time using it.

Film stars and celebrities often share their views on public matters that have little to do with their profession. Is this a positive or negative development?

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explain the stages of the manufacturation of yoghurt.