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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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One of the recently debated topics is whether being a part of a global village is good or not. One of the advantages of globalization would be buying the exact product which can be used by other nations too. I strongly agree with the fact of globalization
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brings us
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equal chances.
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, living in a world
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 has
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 similar situation for everyone without considering the nation, language or even economical level sounds
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.
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, no matter whether you live in America or Australia, you can reach the same
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.
Thus
 if people have similar situations, they would have the same chance to live,
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therefor
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 they might face
fewer discriminations
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less discrimination
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.
Secondly
, if goods were have been
accessable
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accessible
 all over the world, all countries would face an
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 economical growth.
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, they might be
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dramatic economic growth for most
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the countries,
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 undeveloped countries.
Thirdly
, the internet has provided online shopping.
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, people can compare different prices in several online shops and buy the most reasonable price. On the other side, by the meaning of online shops
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there is no
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boundary
 for shopping.
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, one of my Canadian friends mostly buys her dresses from American shops
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 they ship those clothes to her.
On the other hand
, there are some critics
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, some people think that being
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a part of globalization may ruin the same all different cultures around the world. To summarise, purchasing the same products can have many benefits for every
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, but it might destroy any terrific or wonderful culture. All in all, I can not agree more with that.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • globalization
  • diversity
  • homogenization
  • cultural assimilation
  • global connection
  • local businesses
  • economic impact
  • consumerism
  • standardization
  • westernization
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