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Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The
Olympics
Games
 is a historic
event
 in
sports
 that nowadays became arguable and opponents of them say that they have no role in the 21st century. In
this
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 I will consider both sides and give my own point of view.
First
 and foremost, the
Olympics
Games
 is a
sports
event
 that lasts for many decades and consists of many types of
sports
.
In addition
, they bring a lot of tourists to a
country
 where they will be played, which
also
 brings only benefits for the
country
such
 as income, and new tourists. If the
country
 organizes the
Olympics
Games
 on a high level, most likely some people will visit
this
country
 again. Another benefit of
this
event
are
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 being able to view the best
sportsmen
 from each
country
 in the world and how they play against each other. Everyone wants to win every competition and take as many gold medals as they can. The competitive part of the
Olympics
Games
 will never die. Regarding the drawbacks of the
event
, to conduct the
Olympics
Games
, a huge number of economical resources has to be spent. Another downside of the
event
 occurred in recent years. More
sportsmen
 are caught on doping control, which dramatically reduces the number of fans, and question how these
sportsmen
 were allowed to play.
Moreover
, there is nothing new in the
Olympics
Games
. The same
games
,
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 and the same players for many years are not changing which
also
 decreases the interest in watching them. In conclusion, the
Olympics
Games
 is a historic
sports
event
 and role in
sports
. In my opinion,
although
 carrying the
Olympics
Games
 requires a ton of resources and other cons, the fact of viewing the best
sportsmen
 from all over the world is amazing and even
this
 advantage outweighs all disadvantages.
Therefore
, I am a supporter of
further
 implementation and I believe they will have a great role in the
next
 years.
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