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Some people believe that the Olympics Games do not have a role in the 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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The
Olympics
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Games
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 is a historic
event
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 in
sports
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 that nowadays became arguable and opponents of them say that they have no role in the 21st century. In
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 I will consider both sides and give my own point of view.
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 and foremost, the
Olympics
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Games
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 is a
sports
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event
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 that lasts for many decades and consists of many types of
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.
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, they bring a lot of tourists to a
country
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 where they will be played, which
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 brings only benefits for the
country
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 as income, and new tourists. If the
country
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 organizes the
Olympics
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Games
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 on a high level, most likely some people will visit
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country
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 again. Another benefit of
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event
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are
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 being able to view the best
sportsmen
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 from each
country
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 in the world and how they play against each other. Everyone wants to win every competition and take as many gold medals as they can. The competitive part of the
Olympics
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Games
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 will never die. Regarding the drawbacks of the
event
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, to conduct the
Olympics
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Games
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, a huge number of economical resources has to be spent. Another downside of the
event
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 occurred in recent years. More
sportsmen
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 are caught on doping control, which dramatically reduces the number of fans, and question how these
sportsmen
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 were allowed to play.
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, there is nothing new in the
Olympics
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Games
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. The same
games
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 and the same players for many years are not changing which
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 decreases the interest in watching them. In conclusion, the
Olympics
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Games
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 is a historic
sports
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event
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 and role in
sports
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. In my opinion,
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 carrying the
Olympics
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Games
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 requires a ton of resources and other cons, the fact of viewing the best
sportsmen
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 from all over the world is amazing and even
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 advantage outweighs all disadvantages.
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, I am a supporter of
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 implementation and I believe they will have a great role in the
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 years.
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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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