People should keep trying to reach their goals, even if they seem impossible to achieve.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

everyone in

this

world will always have some goals in their life.

hence

, everyone wants to achieve them

also

. in my opinion, I completely agree with the statement that we should always try to achieve our goals. I feel

this

way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.

To begin

with, I believe that our determination and hard work for the goal will always give a positive result. my own personal experience is a compelling example of

this

. when I was in school I always want to be a good runner. in starting I was not in running. but after spending regular time daily in the evening, after four to five months I was among the

first

three runners in my school. that passion for running still continues. even today

also

I keep searching the events for running. and I actively participate in them

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and maintain to be in the

first

three positions.

moreover

, in the same way, I believe that dedication towards our aim makes things possible from impossible. successful people

also

have

this

thing in common in them.

For instance

, when my younger brother always wanted to be a writer,

although

in his school days his writing qualities were not good enough to be a good writer. even his friends were used to making fun of his writing interest. but, he started writing daily in the evening and learn the skills of good writing. after a few months, he started to write very nice short stories, which were appreciated by his teachers and

also

by his friends.

this

all happens because of his continuous effort and diligence. in conclusion, I strongly believe that

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continuous effort with determination will always help us to reach

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goals.