Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information,such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful. Others disagree Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

One of the controversial issues of hiring is asking candidates about their private

beliefs

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or routine information

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their

knowledgement

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acknowledgement

and accomplishments. Some believe it must be kept secret and asking them is not allowed morally

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whereas

other interviewers who imagine personal information can impact their characteristics and

job

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subsequently

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it

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can be helpful and necessary but is not enough . Some employers assume personal information about someone who has applied for a

job

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such

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as his or her marriage

state

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or

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activities for leisure time or

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religious

beliefs

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are completely private which must be kept secret.

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Also

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they believe these factors

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not

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remarkable impact on their

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and manners so it is better to focus on their technical accomplishments.

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Further

more, asking about personal

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and activities little by little becomes

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a custom accompanied

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clichéd

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answers

to convince the interviewer to grant them permission to employ.

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, these days all

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state

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companies ask their volunteers about their religious

beliefs

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which can be demonstrated easily

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someone who is enthusiastic to attend different religious parties and ceremonies. On the opposite, other interviewers have laid down a transparent and comprehensive inquiry including

guestions

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questions

of different aspects

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as marriage

state

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, political and religious views,

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activities for leisure time and etc. to ask their applicants. They believe these factors

implies

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how a person is like to predict his or her manners and

charactristics

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characteristics

after employment.

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,

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data

about their marriage

state

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and family reveals how dependent they would be on the

job

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since being married or having children makes them work with strong loyalty and dedication fearing

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being sacked probably. In conclusion,

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both

arguements

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arguments

have their own merits

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in balance ideas from the

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group can be more acceptable but they must consider that concentrating on personal properties can move them far away from investigating technical knowledge and abilities.

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the reason that it can be necessary and helpful but not enough.