The charts below show the changes in the ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The below graphs depict the percentage of usage of electrical
appliances
and the number of hours
spent per week on house chores like washing clothes, preparing meals and cleaning between the years 1920 and 2019. Overall
, the ownership of the appliances
is the lowest at the beginning, whereas
towards the end it peaks at the highest. Moreover
, the increase in the use of appliances
has resulted in a decrease in the number of hours
spent on housework.
To commence with, the ownership of the
electrical gadgets is the lowest in the year 1920 and Correct article usage
apply
has
peaked at around 100 per cent between the years 1960 and 2019. Unnecessary verb
apply
On the other hand
, due to
increased
utilization of electrical Correct article usage
the increased
appliances
from the year 1960 till 2019, the number of hours
spent on housework has decreased from 30 hours
to around 10 hours
.
Furthermore
, in the year 1920
the percentage of usage of washing Add a comma
,1920
machine
, Refrigerator and Vaccum Fix the agreement mistake
machines
cleaner
are 40, 30 and 0 per cent respectively. Fix the agreement mistake
cleaners
Hence
, the hours
spent on daily housework was 40 hours
which is the highest of all the years.Submitted by suba2705.sk on
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