Although more and more people use public transport. some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. how can this problem be solved? what is your opinion and relevent example.

The

number

of people who are using public

transportation

for commuting is increasing;

however

, it has not been successful yet to decrease

traffic

jams. I believe that

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of old

cities

and their overpopulation have brought

this

problem, which can be addressed by

governments'

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intervention. The following essay will overlook these rationales which are proceeding with two solutions.

To begin

, two main reasons are being discussed for

cities

going crowded despite existing of public

transportation

.

Firstly

, many towns were built

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years ago and have been expanding without

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proper supervision over

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streets

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designs.

For instance

, Tehran is one of the most crowded

cities

in the world consisting of narrow streets, which were not designed to

accomodate

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accommodate

numerous vehicles including public ones.

Consequently

, even by decreasing of private cars, those avenues are

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susceptible

to form

traffic

jams.

Moreover

, overpopulation is another main reason for

this

phenomenon. Over recent decades, the

number

of people in big

cities

increased and public

transportation

could not respond to

this

growth.

Therefore

, many

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residents have to use their private cars since public vehicles do not have the needed capacity for them. Despite the above-said rationales existing, the solutions are feasible. One way to tackle

this

problem is for

governments

to construct more highways and renovate old parts of a town.

For example

, the crowded part of a city is usually its downtown which does not have highways.

Although

establishing a highway

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downtown is not an easy job, it will decrease

traffic

jams as it has done in

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.

In addition

, by providing

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better public

transportation

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is capable of transporting

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number

of humans,

governments

are able to mitigate

this

issue.

Thus

, people will prefer to commute by buses rather than private cars, if they know those buses have enough vacancy for them to sit

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comfortably

, which usually means

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traffics. To sum up, the growing

number

of public transportations' passengers has not been enough to overcome

traffic

and it is rooted in

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professional

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designs of

cities

and the growing

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inquiry

for those vehicles. I believe that

governments

by

remodeling

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narrow streets and providing more public

transportation

can solve

this

problem.