Although more and more people use public transport. some city streets are still overcrowded with traffic. how can this problem be solved? what is your opinion and relevent example.

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The
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of people who are using public
transportation
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for commuting is increasing;
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, it has not been successful yet to decrease
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jams. I believe that
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the designs
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of old
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and their overpopulation have brought
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problem, which can be addressed by
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governments'
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intervention. The following essay will overlook these rationales which are proceeding with two solutions.
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, two main reasons are being discussed for
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going crowded despite existing of public
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.
Firstly
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, many towns were built
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years ago and have been expanding without
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proper supervision over
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streets
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designs.
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, Tehran is one of the most crowded
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in the world consisting of narrow streets, which were not designed to
accomodate
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accommodate
numerous vehicles including public ones.
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, even by decreasing of private cars, those avenues are
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susceptible
to form
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jams.
Moreover
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, overpopulation is another main reason for
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phenomenon. Over recent decades, the
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of people in big
cities
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increased and public
transportation
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could not respond to
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growth.
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, many
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residents have to use their private cars since public vehicles do not have the needed capacity for them. Despite the above-said rationales existing, the solutions are feasible. One way to tackle
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problem is for
governments
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to construct more highways and renovate old parts of a town.
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, the crowded part of a city is usually its downtown which does not have highways.
Although
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establishing a highway
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a
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downtown is not an easy job, it will decrease
traffic
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jams as it has done in
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the countrysides
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countrysides
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.
In addition
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, by providing
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better public
transportation
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which
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is capable of transporting
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number
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of humans,
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are able to mitigate
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issue.
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, people will prefer to commute by buses rather than private cars, if they know those buses have enough vacancy for them to sit
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comfortably
, which usually means
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less
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traffics. To sum up, the growing
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of public transportations' passengers has not been enough to overcome
traffic
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and it is rooted in
inprofessional
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professional
in professional
designs of
cities
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and the growing
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inquiry
for those vehicles. I believe that
governments
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by
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narrow streets and providing more public
transportation
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can solve
this
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problem.
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