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Many people believe that cooking is an essential life skill and should be taught to boys and girls in schools. Others disagree and believe it is a waste of school time. To what extent do you agree?

#people #life #skill #boys #girls #schools #waste #school #time
Dear IRCC Officer, I am writing
this
 letter regarding my
biometric
 information collection. I received an email that informed me to provide my
biometric
 information at any collection service
centre
 nearby before or on April 11th as my application for the permanent resident is about to be processed. Unfortunately, it seems unlikely to get my
biometric
 information collected before
this
 date. I am currently staying in Shanghai, China due
to
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 personal reasons. The Canada
Visa
Centre
 in the city has been cancelling my appointment several times in a row as the lockdown order continues and it remains closed due to the COVID-19 situation. My most recent appointment is on April 11th but there's no sign of lifting the lockdown until now. Even though I called and the
visa
centre
 staff replied that all
biometric
 collection services in Shanghai will be postponed automatically, I'm still worried that the lockdown will not be lifted shortly and the
visa
centre
 won't reopen soon here.
Therefore
, I'd like to ask if it is possible to allow me more time to provide my
biometric
 info
,
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 or please kindly let me know if there is anything I need to do at
this
 moment. I attached the temporarily closed notice from the Canada
Visa
 Application
Centre
 in Shanghai and their website link as well. Thank you for your time and have a good day=) Sincerely, Chang
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