The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

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It is a widely-held belief that shopping

centres

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may be closed in the near future by increasing the popularity of online shopping. I agree with

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matter due to some compelling reasons

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essay.

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, as purchasing online is a more convenient way of shopping, it is gaining fame among customers nowadays.

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, it may cause societies to be less willing to go shopping in the shopping

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matter would lead these

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to be closed

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, in recent years, due to the Covid crisis, online shopping has become more popular among

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worldwide as

people

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prefer remote shopping rather than imperil their health by going outside.

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, by online shopping,

people

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have the chance of acquiring goods from the retailers who only sell online without having any stores in towns.

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people

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would have more options when buying merchandise provided they did shopping online.

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may lead to an increase in popularity of

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way rather than going to shopping

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which may cause them to close. Admittedly, those who oppose the notion believe that some

people

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will always be interested in obtaining goods from brick-and-mortar stores which gives them the chance to touch and see the item closely. Indeed, there would always be customers for shops, preventing them from being closed.

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, as most

people

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believe in the benefits of online shopping and do it

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, shops will probably be closed shortly. To conclude,

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some

people

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are interested in buying items from shops, it seems that shopping

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may be closed in the near future based on some grounds

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as being a more comfortable way of buying goods and having more options in selecting the items needed.

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