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Explain the process of how coffee is produced via dry method.

‏The exhibited process has to do with the production of coffee via a free moist approach.it goes through twelve steps that must ‏be taken in order. ‏To commence with the initial stage, the coffee seeds are categorized manually. Before they had been dried by the sun for approximately a month, they are washed in a large dish Called a sieve. The moisted free seeds not only are raked over and over but turned
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 to reach to maintaining. Process. Being kept in a cylinder vertical container, silo, they await transforming. After they are conveyed to the mill, by utilization of labourers beans are mashed. The fifth image to the final displays classifying with a huge grading machine,
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 graded beans go through bagging before they get ready to wholesale. Two
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 pictures exhibit retailing items hulled beans in the roasting automation process get prepared to be packed and sold.  Overall, the production line of dry coffee includes manual automation and transferring.

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