Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as Sahara Desert and Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

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become a trend nowadays , many people are
intersted
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visting
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visiting
unknown and out of easy reach areas as these comes with adventurous experiences but dangerous risks at the same time. Certain social media handles and youtube channels today are based on exploring sites that are difficult to have a sight for
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, whereas earlier it was difficult for a being to get knowledge about
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areas.
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pole and north pole
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opportunity to people who love to go on journeys and making
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a method to earn fame and money not only it is beneficial for them but other caged souls who cannot afford
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live views can earn pleasure and information about various landscapes which they want to visit and
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can
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of that particular region.
Thus
,tourists approaching less popular tourist spots can provide benefit to
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of people in not only psychological sense but
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economic sense with increased knowledge about these regions.
On the other hand
, various dangers lie within the beauty of
such
places as these have less availability not less but sometimes no provision of
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facility even things of basic necessity cannot be retrieved in some situations.
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channel once
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experience of a traveller who visited Antarctica
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that individual had
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anaphylactic reaction due to certain stimuli present there and because of
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of resources survival rate of that individual was similar to a
last
drop of water in a bottle but somehow he was saved by the efforts of accompanying crew members with him.
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, risks should be kept in mind with
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for
such
circumstances as life is worth more than a trip. In conclusion, interest in places like Sahara and Antarctica can lead to profit to that area in
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of development as well as to the person travelling in terms of money and pleasure but on the opposite side of
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, planning should be done to have a visit to
such
regions in case of medical and basic needs as to avoid situations leading to loss of life due to absence of services essential for survival.
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