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Explain the process that how leather goods are produced

‏the presented diagram illustrates that the production of
leather
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 products goes through eleven steps that must be taken in order. ‏To commence with the initial stage, the animal skins are, hung out to go through the drying process,
then
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 they transferred to the factory by track for more processing. After arrival, not only are they put in won of water and lime but they
also
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 are washed and soaked in lime, After
this
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, It is sent to the huge rolling machine where it is flattened and smoothed. In the
next
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 stage, before they are the polished surface of the skin to produce shine by machine, the skins are soaked in a liquid called Tunnin,which is a mixture of vegetable matter and water.
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 the
leather
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 transported to the factory where that raw
leather
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 Converted into
leather
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 products to sold in the shopping is malls ,
for instance
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, Shoes & handbags and belts and Some other things. ‏Overall, the manufacturing line of
leather
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 goods includes manual, automation and transferring.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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