Some people believe that there should be fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the modern world, by raising the

crime

rate individuals get concerned about and think there should be established

penalizing

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for every kind of

crime

. Other people believe that the decision for

punishment

is related to different situations and other elements. It seems

punishment

would be changeable due to

evidences

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evidence

pieces of evidence

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and

variety

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the variety

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of

crime's

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crime

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type

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types

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. Possibly, in my

eyes

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there are many kinds of

petties

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parties

such

as intentional or unintentional and

punishment

is changeable for them.

For example

, for murdering

as

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an intentional

crime

, authorities should determine imprisonment forever. Because

that is

the highest level of

crime

and it would

hurts

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to

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people in society.

However

, for drug-related petties,

the

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fine or three to five years

prison

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in prison

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is a suitable

punishment

.

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,

for

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apply

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deciding about penalizing should

analyzing

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the elements

such

as mental health and it has

impact

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on the

punishment

,

also

people

if

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who

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had

mental

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a mental

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illness, their

crime

would be unintentional and it changes

punishment

. In against side, it would not impossible to determine fixed penalizing.

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Example

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can be seen as financial crimes. But in my

view

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these

punishment

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punishments

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are not feasible and it is advisable to determine based on individual

condition

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conditions

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. In conclusion, it is reasonable to fix

punishment

with

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by

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evaluation

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evaluating

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the

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of the

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situation or mental health and motivation of

guilty

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the guilty

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person.