You rent a flat with your friend who is moving out. It is too expensive for you to pay the rent alone.Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: •explain the situation •describe why you would like to stay in this flat •ask the landlord if you can find another flatmate

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Dear Mr Sharma, Being tenant of your flat7, Park Avenue, I am writing

this

letter to request some changes in the rental agreement. For over three years, I have been renting

this

apartment with my friend Geet.

However

, Geet is moving out

month. She was offered a new job opportunity which she accepted.

Therefore

, she has to shift to a new city. Despite

this

change, I am unwilling to leave

this

place as it still suits me perfectly.

Firstly

, it is within a good walking distance of my university as well as its excellent condition.

Secondly

this

locale is in the heart of the city,

consequently

, I have never faced any issues regarding shopping, grocery stores, and restaurants. My difficulty is only rent, which

although

reasonable, is too high for me to afford to pay alone. I would like to ask your permission to find another flatmate who would share the cost with me. I hope you understand my situation and permit me to search for a new renter. I look forward to your quick response. Yours sincerely, Rupinder Kaur

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