Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent
day
, the Fix the agreement mistake
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environment
is more
changing due to the development of the world. According to some Correct quantifier usage
apply
people
, the main of
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environment
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environmental
problems
is the disappearance of particular Fix the agreement mistake
problem
species
of plants
and animals
. While others believe that there are more important environmental problems
in the world. In my opinion, there are even bigger causes of concern.
Firstly
, there are more imperative issues of the environment
. Global warming, green house
or climate change, which are making threats against human Correct your spelling
greenhouse
life
, is even more alarming problems
worldwide. For instance
, there are thousand
of Correct your spelling
thousands
people
died
every year because of natural Correct pronoun usage
who died
disaster
. I believe that if we do not have any method to solve these Fix the agreement mistake
disasters
problems
, human life
would be getting worse.
Secondly
, along with environment
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problems
threats
to human Correct word choice
and threats
life
, water pollution which contributed
by waste from industry Add a missing verb
is contributed
area
and garbage from some Fix the agreement mistake
areas
people
without no sense, is leading to effect
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an effect
to
human health. Change preposition
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For example
, a large of people
are facing to
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health
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a health
problem
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problems
such
as cancer or cholera because they were using unclearly water or dirty food. I think protecting fresh water
from becoming polluted should take Correct your spelling
freshwater
the
priority.
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On the other hand
, the main problem that people
believe that particular species
of plants
as well as
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, as well as animals,
animals
is
losingCorrect subject-verb agreement
are
,
is the imbalance in nature. The imbalance ecosystem is Remove the comma
apply
actually
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an actually
significant
issue, that would be Correct article usage
a significant
leaded
to Correct your spelling
led
lose
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loss
a
large number of essential sources Change preposition
of a
to
human Change preposition
of
life
. For example
, human is taking the house of the number of animals
by cutting down tree
for their Add an article
a tree
benefits
. Not only makes a lot of Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
difference
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different
species
plants
reduce but also
animals
do not have place
to exist.
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a place
although
the disappearance of particular species
of plants
and animals
is an environment
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environmental
problems
that we need to carry about, we should focus on Change the noun form
problem
another issues
about Replace the adjective
another issue
other issues
environment
which is more Add an article
the environment
an environment
harm
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harmful
on
human Change preposition
to
life
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