Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Environmental damage is

one

of the most threatening problems that needs thoroughly

considering

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by governments of all nations. It might be said that the prior issue is the disappearance of floral and faunal

species

.

However

, some

people

believe in other vital factors that spoil the environment. I am of the opinion that there are more crucial environmental issues. On

one

hand, I side with the perspective that there are a host of elements leading to the environmental problem for several reasons.

Initially

,

air

pollution is deemed

one

of the most problematic.

This

is a result of urbanization. The more a city is urbanized, the more vehicles there are.

As a result

, the

air

quality is incredibly insecure for

people

.

For instance

, Hanoi, a capital city in Vietnam, faces a huge

air

impurity rate as fumes from means of transportation have nonstop risen due to the rapidly denser population.

Furthermore

,

water

contamination is another component. Owing to human adverse tendencies

such

as pouring chemical contaminants into

water

sources, a number of

people

or animals could unintentionally imbibe it, which seriously influences their health conditions and might cause death for the worst. From the aforementioned points, it is

air

and

water poor

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quality that significantly contribute to the environmental issue.

On the other hand

, it is the loss of plant and animal

species

that imperils nature. It is a common belief that fauna and flora partake in the natural ecosystem and sustain its steadiness. When the ecological food chain,

for example

, loses

one

group of animals, there might be the vanishing of that food chain, and the ecosystem whole turns into chaos or even collapses. In fact, it is obvious that the world is losing a lot of genera when the number of endangered and extinct

species

has been surging.

Therefore

, it is of paramount importance to conserve

species

. Some may state that preserving genera is the most crucial way to better the standard of the environment.

However

,

this

argument is dubious. Ensuring the living standard with environmental purity is even more important since clean

air

and

water

do

wonders

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for survival. Unless you have healthier surroundings

first

, you cannot help the vulnerable

species

. To conclude, even though the loss of several genera leads to the environmental problem, it seems that there are still some other considerations. It is

air

and

water

contamination

that is

believed to be more dominant to intimidate the green surroundings than the extinction of

species

. If

people

pay more attention to the

water

and

air

problems, they can partly solve the conservation. Comments