You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: request advise about a gift for his/her family ask about activities and clothing in his/her country find out about the food You do NOT need to write any address. You should write at least 150 words.

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Hello Sana, How are you? It has been

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a long time since we have been able to catch up and meet each other. I hope you and your family are doing well. I'm writing to seek your

advise

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about a present that I intend to buy for your lovely family. I was thinking about buying an ancient portrait,

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, I'm not sure if they will like it, so please let me know. Even though I am not a big fan of rowing, I would like to try it in Japan to enjoy the beautiful scenery.

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Also

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let me know more about the weather so that I can prepare my suitcase properly. I read that the cuisine in your country is amazing.

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I have a long list of dietary exclusions, I don't mind trying new meals in Japan, but please can you give me an idea about

resturants

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restaurants

? I can't wait to hear from you. Best wishes, Jay

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

159 words

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