You rent a flat with your friend who is moving out. It is too expensive for you to pay the rent alone. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter: •explain the situation •describe why you would like to stay in this flat •ask the landlord if you can find another flatmate

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Dear Ganesh, I am writing

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letter to let you know that to explain my current situation about renting in your apartment. You know very well that I and my friend have rented your apartment for the

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2 years. Even though the rent is pretty much higher we can manage together because of the facilities and the location. My friend completed his studies and was ready to move to his hometown. To be honest, I am very much interested to stay in your flat. But I am really worried about the cost of the rent. The location and facilities were really amazing and

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it was near to my university. I was in my final year and am not ready to relocate for just one year. I am ready to share

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flat if anyone is available. Can you please let me know if the person requires a shared house? It would very helpful for me to save my cost. Thanks for your consideration and hope to get a positive response. Regards Karthi

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Single idea per paragraph

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Lexical resource: 9.0

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