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The film is a less important form of art and literature. To what extent do you agree?

#film #form #art #literature
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Art
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 and
literature
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 have been shown in many patterns
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 as
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, publishing, sculptures , antiques and so on
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 films are less important than the others. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with
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 statement, and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.
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 with, one of the most important reasons why the
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 is not less important than the other
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 and
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 is that the scene elements of
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 can
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 be the storytelling of
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 and
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 during that time since these will express through costume, the way of life, dialogue and story's purpose.
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, the latest study conducted by the faculty of arts, at Bangkok University, revealed that over 80% of new generation Thai historians refer to the scene elements of the
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 in order to study humanity's societies. Having said that, scene elements play a major role in studying
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 and
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. Another reason to support
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 is the fact that
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 fires imagination through multifaceted sensory experience and rich storytelling form.
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 is because the way it tells a story affects our senses. To illustrate
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, take the movie “Spirited Away” for an example. The audience can embark on an adventure into a young girl’s imagination and it is purely an important
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 form. In conclusion, movies, as well as
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 and philosophy, are crucial for mankind as both forms bring considerable benefits.
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,
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 and other significant
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 forms should be considered enormously important, no one is less important than others.
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