It is now possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environment, such as the south pole. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?
The pie chart is comparing the proportion of
energy
capacity
in GW in 2015 with its prediction in 2040.
To begin
with, it is predicted that the capacity
of fossil fuels will fall significantly from 64 per cent
to 44 per cent
and also
there will be a slight decrease in the usage of other types of renewable energy
, which is not noticeable. However
, it is anticipated that we will have more capacity
for various forms of renewable energy
such
as solar and wind. To illustrate this
, there will be an increase (16 per cent
) in the solar energy
capacity
and 7 per cent
for using wind to generate energy
. Although
, there will not be any noticeable difference in the capacity
of nuclear power. Moreover
, it is important.
To conclude, it is anticipated that there will be an increase in the capacity
and the usage of renewable energy
and a decrease in using damaging materials like fossil fuels in the future.Submitted by tsp10majidi on
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion