In theie advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Many companies are racing to produce merchandise with new features and

products

and market them in

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advertisement. Because they want to distract attention from the public and attract more and more people to purchase their

products

after watching the advertisements. I believe

this

is a positive development because both

consumers

and corporations could benefit from

this

trend. It’s undeniable that

consumers

would get better and smarter

products

with high-level technology and creativity if businesses keep using

this

appealing strategy. In order to combat other competitors in the same industry, the companies need to invest more money

for

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producing the latest goods and developing the leading technology in order to introduce the new features of

products

in the advertisements, which leads to lower

price

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and high quality for customers. With the development of technology, people could buy a variety of mobile phones according to their needs and budget with new functions, because of the fierce market.

Moreover

,

this

marketing strategy

also

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the company earn more money than before since they could expand their brand and improve their reputation fast and widely. With more attention and notice coming from people who watched the advertisements, these companies could introduce their

products

to more potential

consumers

.

Nevertheless

, all of the employees could improve their creativity and productivity in the process of developing the new generation. In the competitive market of mobile

phone

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, Apple, Samsung and Huawei are trying to provide their customers with

best

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smartphone

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earlier and cheaper than others each year using their creativity and business skills. In summary, introducing

products

on

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new functions would be a positive trend for both corporations and individuals.

This

marketing strategy brings lots of profits to the merchandise and

allow

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consumers

to purchase

products

cost-efficiently.