Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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competitions

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others argue that cooperations are far more significant for

children

to become successful adults.

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, for a purpose of educating, I believe that a sense of competition

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spirit are both

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important. These two aspects will be discussed in detail below. There are some attitudes which believe that

children

should compete with each other in spite

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competitions

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might cause

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for them. Without doubts, humans’ progression

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from different

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their

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early age.

Children

benefit massively from a competitive environment at school, which will bring

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a positive and long-lasting impact. Racing with others,

for example

, is

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an effective way to educate them

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game rules and running techniques, but

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build up their confidence to do their best in a game.

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healthy competition in

children

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success and triumph. There is an opposite view that

co-operate

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capacity is an essential skill to make

children

become successful individuals in the future. As we all know, great projects can not be done only by a child, but

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fabulous team. Whether a drawing painted by a son and his mother, or a

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made with friends in

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, they reflect the significance of teamwork spirit in

children

.

Moreover

,

children

’s personalities and sociabilities can both be shaped by working in groups. They will be more likely to gain well-paid job opportunities from project-oriented companies in future. Obviously, co-operation skills allow

children

effectively build connections with people, as well as maintain a positive

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relationships

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between

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others. In conclusion, I believe that

competitions

are as important as

cooperations

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cooperation

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for

young

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generation to develop healthy personalities and learning abilities, which will activate their motivation to progress gradually, as well as bring them to a bright success, in the future workforce.