Some people believe that parents should be responsible for encouraging their children to take regular exercise. Others argue that the main responsibility for encouraging children to do so should lie with schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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in the most difficult situations where

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say that

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their

children

to continue physical activities. Nowadays, the health state of young

children

is at an

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rate as most of them are suffering from obesity and weak immune system. There are several controversial arguments involving whether

parents

or schools should be responsible for encouraging them to take regular

exercise

. In

this

essay, I will discuss both perspectives and give my own idea.

First

of all, it is generally believed that

parents

have more opportunities to share time with their

children

and teach them good habits.

Moreover

, taking

exercise

from

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age can form a healthy lifestyle during their lifelong and

thus

, difficult to be given up. Some

parents

also

do that with their

children

to be a good

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as well as draw in them a basic awareness of health protection.

In addition

, every pair of

parents

usually have one to two

children

, which means they can give enough care and attention to their

children

’s health while it is impossible at a school with thousands of students.

On the other hand

, not all

parents

are available to spend too much time with their

children

and have enough knowledge on

exercise

for kids. In

this

case, schools are proved to be a reliable place for

this

mission as they are

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with suitable facilities and

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to maintain students’ physical performance.

Furthermore

,

children

usually find it easier to keep

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at

schools

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and sometimes are enthusiastic to take

exercise

with their friends. All things considered, I firmly believe that

this

is both schools’ and

parents

’ responsibility to encourage

children

to take

exercise

regularly because it can give them more motivation and conditions to keep healthy.