Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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computers

are become

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, especially in schools,

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many people believe that

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good for pupils, while others say there are a lot of

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drawbacks

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I give my own perspective.

Computer

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The computer

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is an inevitable device in the

techonoly

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technology

era

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when every

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process

can not be done without it. As well as

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,

educational

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system

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to introduce modern technologies into

curriculum

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the curriculum

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. By using

computers

in schools teachers could check pupils more accurate.

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, if there are

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number of children, they could not look through each home assignment well. To illustrate, decades ago teachers dedicate significant time to

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feedbacks

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and

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homeworks

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homework

instead

of

teach

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.

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device

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also

might be useful for teenagers, it is clear, that the most demanded profession

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future

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is

computer

scientists

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. As

this

can provide them with

better

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future.

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,

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trend has several disadvantages.

Firstly

, it can affect their health, especially

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. It is proven

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when

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people use

such

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more than four

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hours a day they might be tired and

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stressful

. As well as

this

, integrating

computers

into education can cause social problems

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young

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the young

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generation. To illustrate, if

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a kid

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has

the

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computer

, he

more

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is more

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likely to be alone. The main reason

to

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this

is

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the lack

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of social

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skills

. It is predicted that in the future, people will use only apps for daily conversations

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of

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meeting

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.

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, if

computer

devices replace

usual

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pen and paper it can lead to disappearing subjects

such

as arts, music,

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drawing

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and so on. As the worst consequence children will be without

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imagination. In conclusion, both notions have their merits and negatives. On balance,

however

, I feel that replacing all equipment with

computers

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bad idea.

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is because

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consequenses

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consequences

are extremely dangerous for physical and

physialogical

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physiological

aspects of our children at school.