Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

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, especially in schools,
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many people believe that
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good for pupils, while others say there are a lot of
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I give my own perspective.
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The computer
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is an inevitable device in the
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era
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when every
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can not be done without it. As well as
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,
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system
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to introduce modern technologies into
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. By using
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in schools teachers could check pupils more accurate.
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, if there are
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number of children, they could not look through each home assignment well. To illustrate, decades ago teachers dedicate significant time to
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and
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homeworks
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homework
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of
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teaching
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.
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device
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also
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might be useful for teenagers, it is clear, that the most demanded profession
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future
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is
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scientists
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. As
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can provide them with
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future.
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,
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trend has several disadvantages.
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, it can affect their health, especially
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their eyes
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. It is proven
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when
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that when
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people use
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device
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devices
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more than four
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hours a day they might be tired and
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stressful
. As well as
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, integrating
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into education can cause social problems
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young
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the young
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generation. To illustrate, if
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a kid
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has
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computer
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, he
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likely to be alone. The main reason
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is
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of social
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skills
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of
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a real
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meeting
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meetings
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.
Moreover
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, if
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devices replace
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the usual
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pen and paper it can lead to disappearing subjects
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as arts, music,
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drawing
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and so on. As the worst consequence children will be without
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imagination. In conclusion, both notions have their merits and negatives. On balance,
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, I feel that replacing all equipment with
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bad idea.
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is because
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consequenses
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consequences
are extremely dangerous for physical and
physialogical
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physiological
aspects of our children at school.
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