More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

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stable
life
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is everyone's dream, yet it is not easy to get and
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a lot
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effort
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to achieve
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. Many
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are leaving
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their place to cities for looking a better
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, but
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apparently
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's
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could be extremely hard. In my opinion, I agree that
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in the
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can be difficult as many
people
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nowadays move to the
city
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and it will impact
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opportunities, heavy traffic, and
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air
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pollution
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. Many
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think that looking
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in the
city
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is easier
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than
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the
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in the
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village. In fact, the opportunity is more tight and challenging in the
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as there are many
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immigrate
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to the bigger
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.
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, In Jakarta, Indonesia, 10 years ago,
fresh
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a fresh
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graduate
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graduates
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from University always got
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a job
the job
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job
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jobs
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within at least 1 week after the day of graduation but the situation is changed now as many fresh
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seeker
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seekers
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are still hard to find
the
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job
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.
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, The
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should take
incharge
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charge
in charge
to open
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opportunity
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opportunities
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to address
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this problems
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this problem
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. The
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also
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can provide
soft
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a soft
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load to
enterprenuer
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entrepreneurs
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to expand their business so that they will need more
employee
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employees
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to be hired
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of living in the
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is
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about
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apply
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air
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pollution
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that massively
abvious
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obvious
as the
numbers
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number
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of cars is always increasing every year. As
people
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sattle
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settle
settled
in the
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, they need to buy their own car to support their transportation, and
its
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it
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contaminate
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contaminates
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the
air
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condition
to
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of
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the
city
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.
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, In Jakarta, Indonesia
people
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buy at least 1 car for every house in the
city
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and somehow they can buy more than two cars.
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view can make the
road heavy
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road-heavy
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traffice
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traffic
especially
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in the busy hours during
people
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go and back from the office.
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, The
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regulated the rules of ownership
cars
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of cars
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to prevent the increase
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in
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number
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the number
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and its impact decrease of
air
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pollution
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. To conclude, many
people
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move to the
city
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to search
of
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for
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a better
life
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yet the
city
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life
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can be extremely difficult in
term
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terms
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of
job
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opportunity
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opportunities
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, traffic as well as
air
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pollution
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. I think the
Government
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is always looking the solutions to handle the difficulties and do the best effort to make urban
life
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better for
the
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apply
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society.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urbanization
  • Metropolis
  • Rapid urban growth
  • Megacity
  • Urban sprawl
  • Housing affordability
  • Infrastructure development
  • Public transportation
  • Traffic congestion
  • Pollution
  • Noise pollution
  • Green spaces
  • Job market
  • Social cohesion
  • Community engagement
  • Safety measures
  • Crime prevention
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