More and more people are migrating to cities in search of a better life, but city life can be extremely difficult. Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city. How can governments make urban life better for everyone?

Having

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

stable

life

is everyone's dream, yet it is not easy to get and

require

Correct subject-verb agreement

requires

show examples

a lot

Correct your spelling

effort

efford

Change preposition

of efford

show examples

to achieve

it

Correct pronoun usage

apply

show examples

. Many

people

are leaving

from

Change preposition

apply

show examples

their place to cities for looking a better

life

, but

apperently

Correct your spelling

apparently

city

's

life

could be extremely hard. In my opinion, I agree that

life

in the

city

can be difficult as many

people

nowadays move to the

city

and it will impact

job

opportunities, heavy traffic, and

also

air

pollution

. Many

people

think that looking

job

in the

city

is easier

that

Correct your spelling

than

show examples

the

Change preposition

in the

show examples

village. In fact, the opportunity is more tight and challenging in the

city

as there are many

people

immigrate

Wrong verb form

immigrating

show examples

to the bigger

city

.

For example

, In Jakarta, Indonesia, 10 years ago,

fresh

Add an article

a fresh

show examples

graduate

Fix the agreement mistake

graduates

show examples

from University always got

Add an article

a job

the job

show examples

job

Fix the agreement mistake

jobs

show examples

within at least 1 week after the day of graduation but the situation is changed now as many fresh

job

seeker

Change to a plural noun

seekers

show examples

are still hard to find

the

Correct article usage

a

show examples

job

.

Thus

, The

Government

should take

incharge

Correct your spelling

charge

in charge

to open

job

opportunity

Fix the agreement mistake

opportunities

show examples

to address

this problems

Change the determiner

this problem

these problems

show examples

. The

Government

also

can provide

soft

Add an article

a soft

show examples

load to

enterprenuer

Correct your spelling

entrepreneurs

entrepreneur

to expand their business so that they will need more

employee

Fix the agreement mistake

employees

show examples

to be hired

Other difficulties

Fix the agreement mistake

Another difficulty

show examples

of living in the

city

is

Change the verb form

are

show examples

about

Change preposition

apply

show examples

air

pollution

that massively

abvious

Correct your spelling

obvious

as the

numbers

Fix the agreement mistake

number

show examples

of cars is always increasing every year. As

people

sattle

Correct your spelling

settle

settled

in the

city

, they need to buy their own car to support their transportation, and

its

Correct pronoun usage

it

show examples

contaminate

Correct subject-verb agreement

contaminates

show examples

the

air

condition

to

Change preposition

of

show examples

the

city

.

For instance

, In Jakarta, Indonesia

people

buy at least 1 car for every house in the

city

and somehow they can buy more than two cars.

This

view can make the

road heavy

Add a hyphen

road-heavy

show examples

traffice

Correct your spelling

traffic

especially

Add the comma(s)

,especially

show examples

in the busy hours during

people

go and back from the office.

Thus

, The

Government

regulated the rules of ownership

cars

Change preposition

of cars

show examples

to prevent the increase

of

Change preposition

in

show examples

number

Add an article

the number

show examples

and its impact decrease of

air

pollution

. To conclude, many

people

move to the

city

to search

of

Change preposition

for

show examples

a better

life

yet the

city

life

can be extremely difficult in

term

Fix the agreement mistake

terms

show examples

of

job

opportunity

Fix the agreement mistake

opportunities

show examples

, traffic as well as

air

pollution

. I think the

Government

is always looking the solutions to handle the difficulties and do the best effort to make urban

life

better for

the

Correct article usage

apply

show examples

society.