IN a number of countries , some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on constructing new railway lines for very fast trains between cities.Other believe the money should be spent on improving existing public transport

In some nations,
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of individual
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that government spend more amount of
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to start novel railway lines for fast
trains
in
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urban areas.Few opine that amount ought to be spent on improvement of
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of
transport
which are actively working.I will discuss both views with my opinion in the upcoming paragraphs. On the
one
hand,
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of every nation spend the public money on
construction
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of fast railway tracks it will be
benefical
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for every
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person and
also
on
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environment
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.To be more precise, in the case of emergency
one
person who is not able to hire any taxi since of high rate and
also
they want to reach their destination earlier
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it will be helpful.
Moreover
, government
transport
is less expensive rather than
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mode of transportation.It will be helpful for
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of
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beacause
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because
maximum people try to avoid to commute
one
place to another by their personal
vechicles
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vehicles
.
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, According to an article
publesh
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published
publish
in 'The Tribune' in 2020 , some developed nations have declined in
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environment
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due to fast
trains
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have started in the towns.
On the other hand
, some people think that it is
also
important to improve the facilities of those transports
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which
is on working.In most
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countries
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, there are
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appropriate seating
arrangents
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arrangements
on buses ,
trains
or autorikshaws> Most
of
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people
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travel their whole journey while standing.It is the duty of
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government
governemnt
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to start the medical facility on
trains
and buses.In the
casee
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case
cases
of
first
aid
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it can be helpful.
Furthermore
, rates should be less because most of the labourers travel through
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of public
transportaion
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transportation
.
Moreover
, potholes should be closed by local
authorties
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authorities
so that
person
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people
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can be commuted comfortably .
Also
, increase the safety measures by installing cameras inside the
trains
and buses.
As a result
, it can help passengers if they lost their
belogings
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belongings
.
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, In 2019 , data collected by
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newspaper
of
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United
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Kingdom the theft cases is reduced by jet speed and reached
at
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20% after applying
CCTV's
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in public
transport
. In conclusion, After discussing both views.I think new technology of
transport
plays a vital role in these days owing to
time
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problem.Individuals can easily commute from
one
place to another in less time.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • efficient
  • congestion
  • sustainable
  • environmentally friendly
  • connectivity
  • economic growth
  • public transportation
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