Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

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Dear Sir , Kindly let me introduce myself .

This

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is Mee Mee who visited your movie

theater

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theatre

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two days ago. Literally , I am writing

this

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letter to inform

about

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you about

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a jacket which

was forgot

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was forgotten

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the cinema.

To begin

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with , it is a blue colour long sleeve medium size unisex jacket . What is more , there is a pocket on the right side.

Moreover

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, if my memory serves me right , there is

also

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a red stain at the corner of the left collar .

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this

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jacket is not inexpensive , it has some sentimental value because my mother gave me

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it as

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a birthday present. More specifically , I was late for the movie that day.

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, I got to sit in the

first

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row , and I was seated in 4 A which was very close proximity to the exit door. As I have mentioned earlier how much it means to me , I really want to take it back if it is possible .

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, could you please have a check for me ? Luckily , if it was found , would you immediately contact me? Thank you for

kind

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your kind

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help in advance. Yours faithfully, Mee Mee

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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Write a letter to the manager of a cinema (movie theatre) about a jacket you have left behind after a film. In your letter: Describe the jacket Describe where you were seated Explain what you want to be done

Some people think the increasing business and cultural contact between countries brings many positive effects . Others say it causes the loss of national identities.Discuss both of these views and give your own opnion.

Some people believe that professional sportsmen and women are paid too much money nowadays in relation to their usefulness to society. Do you agree or disagree?

More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantanges? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

These days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children’s behavior. Do you agree or disagree?