Some psychologist recommend that to overcome stresses in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day. Do you agree or disagree?

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with desperation and anxiety as I stare at the blank page on my desk

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This

is my

first

time sitting for an external

exam

although

I have conquered the

last

few pages without any difficulties, I find myself hopelessly stuck at the

last

one. To add to my misery, I realized that

this

question

also

brings the highest mark- precisely eight marks. I try to keep myself calm, as I reread the

question

However

, I could not make sense of the

question

as if it is written in another language! How could I solve

this

question

? I have never felt so frustrated and anxious in my whole life, I think miserably while calculating fiercely on the blank page. Deep down in my heart, I heard a tiny voice asking, am I going to fail the

exam

, despite all the hard work? A chill runs down my back as I looked at the clock and realize that I have only 20 minutes left. How could

this

happen! I had studied for a whole year to prepare myself for

this

exam

, yet I could not even solve

this

question

This

is horrible! Tears start to form in my eyes, as I read through my calculation in despair. No matter what I try to do, the calculation just seems to be wrong. With all my might, I try to prevent myself from crying out loud in the middle of the

exam

hall, while thousands of

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are racing through my head. What if the

question

itself is wrong? Could there be anything I misread? And the worst of all the questions, what if I fail the

exam

because of

this

question

? Inside my heart, I felt that hope is like a dim-lit candle in the dark, weak and dying out at

this

very minute. Suddenly, like struck by

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, I realized my mistake. How could I be so stupid and not

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it! Filled once again with hope, I start to solve the

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time, with a victorious smile

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my lips.

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Some psychologist recommend that to overcome stresses in daily life we should do nothing at all for a period of time of the day. Do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

The major cities in around the world continue growth, the more problems they may have. What the problems young people are caused by develop? What can be done to solve this?

In some countries, it is illegal for employers to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think it is a negative or positive development?

Some people argue that it is the government's responsibility to transport children to school while others belive that parents should do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people prefer watch foreign film rather than locally produced films. Why could this be? Should government give more financial support to local movie industries?

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+