The charts below show the changes in ownership of electrical appliances and amount of time spent doing housework in households in one country between 1920 and 2019. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The line graph depicts the becoming difference in ownership of electrical devices
as well as
allocating
amount
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the amount
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of time to do chores in households in one country from 1920 to 2019. Generally speaking, the percentage of vacuum cleaners remains constant between 1920 and 2019.
Moreover
, in 1920 the
ratio
of refrigerators reaches the lowest point over the
period
.
Furthermore
, the number of hours of chores per week gradually falls down during the
period
. When it comes to details, refrigerator per cent commences with a tiny portion after that it skyrockets to just over 50% between 1920 and 1940,
however
, beginning from 1980, the refrigerator
ratio
is 100% and exactly the same until the end of the
period
.
Furthermore
, the washing machine’s numbers start the
period
with
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40% and
then
it rises to 60% in 1940.In the 60s the washing machines percentage is 70%
similarly
vacuum cleaner portion
the
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same as well.After 1960 the
ratio
of washing machines is fluctuating by 2019.Turning to vacuum cleaners, it begins
with
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30% and
continuesa
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continues
continues a
gradual climb until 2000
then
the
ratio
is 100 % unchanged from 2000 to 2019. It can be clearly seen that there is a gradual decrease in the number of housework hours per week by 1960, it commences with 50%to 20%. When we observed between 1980 and 2019, the
ratio
is slightly fluctuating
at the end
of the
period
.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "furthermore".
Vocabulary: Replace the words ratio, period with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "gradually" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household appliances
  • time-efficient
  • labour-saving devices
  • technological innovations
  • ownership rate
  • housework chores
  • domestic workload
  • automation
  • advancements
  • trend analysis
  • societal shifts
  • economic impact
  • durability
  • lifespan of appliances
  • maintenance
  • historical comparison
  • time allocation
  • drudgery reduction
  • energy consumption
  • disruption in trends
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