Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think might be

Nowadays, environmental issues and reducing the volume of traffic and pollution are the major concern throughout the world

that is

why different ideas are given to deal these recommendations is , increasing the

price

of petrol. I strongly disagree with

this

suggestion because it

cause

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inflation in countries and I believed other measured should be adopted which can even be more effective. one of the most important issues should be that increasing

price

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the price

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of petrol does not seem reasonable because it

lead

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inflation

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to inflation

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in

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in-country

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country

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and has

negative

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impact on

people’s

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people

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life

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live .To explain

this

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issues I should say the

price

of transportation of goods

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therefore

people have to spend more money to buy different products.

In addition

, it will increase the expenditure on energy which needs fossil fuels to be produced

such

as electricity . In order to solve traffic and pollution

problems

other

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another

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way

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can be more beneficial .

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, people should switch to

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eco-friendly

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eco- friendly

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eco-friendly

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vehicles

instead

of using motorized vehicles for short destinations . Government can

moreover

have an important role in dealing

these

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with these

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problems

. They should improve

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public

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pubic

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public

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transportation and encourage people to use them

by

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in

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different ways

such

as

decreasing

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by decreasing

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the

price

of tickets . In conclusion, increasing the

price

of petrol is not the best way to alleviate traffic and pollution

problems

because it can cause economical

problems

meanwhile other solutions

such

as using eco-friendly vehicles and public transportation can be more useful .