Nowadays, environmental issues and reducing the volume of traffic and pollution are the major concern throughout the world
that is
why different ideas are given to deal these recommendations is , increasing the Linking Words
price
of petrol. I strongly disagree with Use synonyms
this
suggestion because it Linking Words
cause
inflation in countries and I believed other measured should be adopted which can even be more effective.
one of the most important issues should be that increasing Change the verb form
causes
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price
of petrol does not seem reasonable because it Correct article usage
the price
lead
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leads
inflation
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to inflation
in
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in-country
country
and has Add an article
the country
negative
impact on Add an article
a negative
people’s
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people
life
live .To explain Replace the word
live
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this
issues I should say the Correct determiner usage
these
price
of transportation of goodsUse synonyms
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, therefore,
therefore
people have to spend more money to buy different products. Linking Words
In addition
, it will increase the expenditure on energy which needs fossil fuels to be produced Linking Words
such
as electricity .
In order to solve traffic and pollution Linking Words
problems
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other
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another
way
can be more beneficial .Fix the agreement mistake
ways
For instance
, people should switch to Linking Words
Correct your spelling
eco-friendly
eco- friendly
vehicles Correct your spelling
eco-friendly
instead
of using motorized vehicles for short destinations . Government can Linking Words
moreover
have an important role in dealing Linking Words
these
Change preposition
with these
problems
. They should improve Use synonyms
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public
pubic
transportation and encourage people to use them Correct your spelling
public
by
different ways Change preposition
in
such
as Linking Words
decreasing
the Change preposition
by decreasing
price
of tickets .
In conclusion, increasing the Use synonyms
price
of petrol is not the best way to alleviate traffic and pollution Use synonyms
problems
because it can cause economical Use synonyms
problems
meanwhile other solutions Use synonyms
such
as using eco-friendly vehicles and public transportation can be more useful .Linking Words