Nowadays, environmental issues and reducing the volume of traffic and pollution are the major concern throughout the world
why different ideas are given to deal these recommendations is , increasing the
of petrol. I strongly disagree with
suggestion because it
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inflation in countries and I believed other measured should be adopted which can even be more effective.
one of the most important issues should be that increasing
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of petrol does not seem reasonable because it
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and has
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impact on
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live .To explain
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issues I should say the
of transportation of goods
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people have to spend more money to buy different products.
, it will increase the expenditure on energy which needs fossil fuels to be produced
as electricity .
In order to solve traffic and pollution
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can be more beneficial .
, people should switch to
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vehicles
of using motorized vehicles for short destinations . Government can
have an important role in dealing
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. They should improve
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transportation and encourage people to use them
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different ways
as
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the
of tickets .
In conclusion, increasing the
of petrol is not the best way to alleviate traffic and pollution
because it can cause economical
meanwhile other solutions
as using eco-friendly vehicles and public transportation can be more useful .