Children who are brought up in families that do not have large amount of money are better prepared to deal with the problems of adult life than children brough up by wealthy parents. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
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priority
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belong
a poor families
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poor families
a poor family
they
have difficulties to an arrange money for Correct pronoun usage
apply
studies
.While,some people believe that, the Correct pronoun usage
their studies
education
authorities can release some Use synonyms
facilities
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further
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education
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elecricity
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electricity
all expense
quite difficult for Add a hyphen
all-expense
a
poor pupils to arrange. Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
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education
system could supply a free hostel room along with lunch as well as dinner, Correct article usage
the education
free
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and free
book
.Fix the agreement mistake
books
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India
the government colleges have all the free Add a comma
,India
facilities
for a tribal community.
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this student
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these students
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they can earn some money for their daily needs.Correct pronoun usage
which
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pupils
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children
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types
facilities
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facilities
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from
the government universities. Nowadays, Change preposition
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authority
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authorities
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provides
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a
middle class
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middle-class
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children
childrens
for their all needs,Correct your spelling
children
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also
have a free hostel including meals.Correct word choice
and also
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, the Canadian government Linking Words
supplying
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supplies
dollar
per student.
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dollars
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children
childrens
have Correct your spelling
children
a difficulties
surviving while Correct the article-noun agreement
difficulties
a difficulty
education
.I believe that Use synonyms
this
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be solve
by Change the verb form
be solved
authorities
.Correct article usage
the authorities
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, poor pupils can complete Linking Words
studies
without difficulties.Correct pronoun usage
their studies
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